The day I traded my sister for a nerf gun

WALT Write an Introduction that hooks the audience I used dialogue for my writing “You will not trade your dad,” said my mum angrily “I promise,” I said “Good now go,” said my mum demanded impatiently I quietly thought to myself “I wasn’t going to trade my dad but she didn’t say anything about trading my sister”... “I'm going to get something, stay here and don’t trade your dad,” my mom told me seriously. When she left, Nathan came over to the back yard and showed me his new nerf gun. It was the one I wanted so I asked him if he wanted any of my toys for the gun. He took one look at my toys and surprisingly took another look at my dad. Finally, he said “ I don’t want your toys and I don’t want your dad. When I heard this I was desperate but suddenly I had a brilliant idea. “Take my sister then,” I said and pointed at her. “Can she do maths,'' asked Nathan with an evil grin? “Yes yes yes” I replied desperately “Ok, I’ll do a trade,” said Nathan then he left with my sister When mom came back I asked her if we can get some nerf darts and she replied “if we really need them” So I showed her my nerf gun. “Where did you get this from,” she said suspiciously “ nowhere,” I said unconvincingly. “Where your sister you didn’t do it did you,” said mom in a VERY suspicious tone Since my cover was blown, I decided to tell her the truth. When I was done talking, she looked at me like she was going to explode. She gave me my nerf gun and told me to get my sister back. I ran to Nathan's house. I ran so fast I think I could have gotten a gold medal in the Olympics for running at THAT speed. When I got there I was exhausted. Nathan came to the door and I told him I wanted my sister back. I got my sister and we ran home again. My mom made me promise not to trade my dad and my sister but she didn’t say anything about herself. hehehe... To be continued